天天向上 · 写作:回应四个要点的邮件
PET / B1 · Writing Part 1 · 本站原创学习材料
对应 Writing Part 1:根据来信和四个提示写一封约 100 词的邮件。先照顾读者需要,再检查语言。
学习范围:Cambridge B1 Preliminary for Schools。本站材料不等同于官方试卷。
学习方法
读来信,也读四个提示:每个提示都代表读者需要知道的信息。先辨认是在同意、选择、建议还是解释。
按交流顺序组织邮件:用合适的称呼和回应开头,中间给选择、理由与安排,最后自然结束。可以将相关要点放在同一段。
检查收信人能否行动:读完邮件后,对方应清楚去哪儿、为什么、带什么、在哪里见面。再检查时态、标点和拼写。
写作任务
Write an email to Alex in about 100 words. Respond to all four notes.
From: Alex Subject: Saturday Hi! I am coming to your town on Saturday. Would you like to spend the day together? Shall we visit the science museum or the sports centre? I could bring some food for us. What would be useful? Also, where should we meet? See you soon, Alex
- Great! — 表示愿意一起度过周六。
- Choose one and explain why — 选择科学博物馆或体育中心,并解释。
- Suggest some food — 建议带什么食物。
- Suggest a meeting place — 给出见面地点。
构思与自查
回应邀请:________________________________________________
选择和理由:________________________________________________
食物建议:________________________________________________
见面安排:________________________________________________
□ Content · 内容:四个提示都回应了,对方知道选择、理由、食物和见面地点。
□ Communicative Achievement · 交际效果:语气像写给朋友的邮件,有自然称呼、回应和结尾。
□ Organisation · 组织:相关信息放在一起,理由和安排连接清楚,分段容易阅读。
□ Language · 语言:用合适的将来表达、请求句和连接词,并检查主谓一致、拼写与标点。
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参考答案与证据
参考写法
Hi Alex, It is great that you are coming on Saturday. I would love to spend the day with you! I think we should visit the science museum because there is a new exhibition about space. We can try some experiments there too. Could you bring some sandwiches and fruit? I will bring water, so we will have everything we need for lunch. Let us meet outside the library at ten. It is easy to find, and the museum is only a short walk away. I am really looking forward to seeing you. Let me know if ten is too early. See you soon, Jamie
回应与选择:直接回应邀请,让收信人知道你愿意参加。
解释理由:选择与具体理由相连,补全第二个提示。
提出建议:用适合朋友邮件的请求表达,回应食物问题。
落实安排:地点明确,并用时间和步行距离补充有用信息。